For this term our class have been reading a serial story called posted by John David Anderson. And each week we have a task that we do, given from the teacher and we have to complete it before the end of the week. so this is just part of it and there will be more to it, each week.
Monday, 3 September 2018
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hi moni,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a nice strong complex sentence in your work and I also like how you were being specific in your single paragraphs that was cool. something you need to work on is fixing up your punctuation but besides that keep up the good work:)
thank you Simon, for giving an awesome feed back for me to work on and I will sure work on it next time I do another one.
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