The man who was Paralysed from a figure
As the old man limped away, from the figure of the wild, blood dripping. Till shadows raised upon the land with water dripping from above the sky. The man was so paralysis because of how much damage he had taken.When he was going for a walk to go to the river near the woods.
He retreated to his cabin and hid inside it.The water from outside that was falling from the sky made loud noises. Branches moving. Animals slithering around the cabin.Till The Door slammed open and the figure came inside and found him. A moment later the man heart stopped beating.
WALT: use shows not tell in our writing work and I tried to use show not tell, It was pretty hard for me.
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