ANZAC Soldier
It all started in 1914 it was a cold freezing morning and there were gunshots happening. I was a young boy that time, but suddenly something really dangerous was happening.
The guns were ready, they started blasting to their enemies while on the other side, I and my friend Freda were hiding in the trench. Freda was really confused about, the blasting and the crashes. While I and my friend Freda were there on the other side my best friend is blasting and trying to fight their enemies. But I was crying in tears to end the war and have victory upon our land.
WALT: Write the flashback from a different perspective and use
show not tell."The ANZAC Puppy" By Peter Millett and Trish Bowles
what I liked was writing the story because I like to write.
I need to be better at my spelling
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