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Monday, 20 March 2017

Goldilocks

Goldilocks
Once upon a time there lived a girl called Goldilocks but others called her smelly lock because she is is a loner and she is poor her place was very old that the wood was so soft that the house would have comes down really easily also know one cares about her and they call her smelly lock because she only showers twice a week.
But one day her parents forgot Goldilocks because they were going on a trip that was offered by her aunt from the mums side Instead Goldilocks had her own adventure all by herself she loves going to the woods. Once she found a little house.
She knocked on the door no one answered she knocked again but this time it was louder,than before when the door blasted open the baby bear screamed as loud as he could.
What do you think happened next ?
Image result for goldilock pngTo be continued...

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 March 2017 at 10:55

    Hey Moni, I enjoyed reading your story; It was quick and simple to read. Next time could you maybe re-read your writing?
    Thanks!

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  2. Anonymous20 March 2017 at 10:55

    Hi Moni,
    I like how you have added a picture to your story, you have set out your work really nicely, Something you could do next time is have another read over it because you wrote is two times.

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